Tutor List  Add Classes  US Time to Korea Time     Sample Editing  Scoring Guide Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Teachers should make learning enjoyable and fun for their students. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Essay: If my teachers make leaning enjoyable and fun for my class. I agree that. because I think it is a good way to make students remember in subject and want to study in school so I am a student in school and university long time I think I know the felling of students when teachers teach. Some teachers are strong in subject. ...1 They stay on time and teach all of time until finch. We didn't have break times or time for relax. After class we are very tired and we couldn't to remember that the teacher teach us. We know nothing, but some teacher knows about that he tries to teach us and have time to relax or enjoyable for example we take together in class or have some game to play together about subject that the teacher teachs us or have break time for drink water. ...2 I like this way to study. I think it makes us understand and want to study more than another way. I think I can say intersent every students I like if teachers should make leaning enjoyable and fun for their students. I agree. ...3 ID: SungJin (07/21/03 PM 1:35) Copy/Paste your editing to save time. Topic No comments. (From TOEFL TEST) Essay 1. I agree that teachers should make leaning enjoyable and fun. I think it is a good way to help students remember what has been taught and encourage them to continue their studies. I am a student currently in school and have attended a university for a long time. I know how students feel about the different ways teachers teach. Most teachers know their subjects very well, however, some teachers lecture for the entire class without giving any breaks. After class the students are very tired and many find it hard to remember what has been taught. 2. The better teachers do try to make their classes interesting by adding personal stories and giving occasional breaks. Sometimes even a game can be played incorporating information about the subject that is being taught. 3. I do like this way of teaching. I think it helps students to understand the subject matter better. I believe that students will study harder for teachers that make their classes fun and interesting. The above reasons are why I agree with this statement. General Comments Your essay has some interesting ideas but it suffers from awkward and sometimes inappropriate statements that undermine your argument. This essay has good ingredients, but, as currently written, it is inadequate. Also, try not to create the impression of overly simplistic thinking. Score: 3.0 (If it is for Test, 0 ~ 6)